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Friday, October 27, 2017

Language Features

This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.


Whoosh went on  soft green football field i went for the goal. i felt like a  superhero and i kit the  soccer ball into the goal. goooaaal!!!! Everyone cheers like crazy monkeys into the distance and the big nights want  like the  shiny moon in the sky!!!!!!